need a proper honest critique
mind you
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Dill,
Sun 22 Jun 2003, 19:39,
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well it's not so much "lit"
as banter
b.t.w. I got an A
edit/ but if you could be brutal!
there's a tenner in it and I'll bring me own ropes
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Dill,
Sun 22 Jun 2003, 19:43,
archived)
on its way
dear girl
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Dill,
Sun 22 Jun 2003, 19:49,
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