Some of those bits are my favourite moments in it.
The contrast is what makes it more effective, in my opinion.
( FoldsFive wishes to remain an omnibus, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:43, archived)

see below
I'm really just taking the piss. It's a fucking wrong book in so many ways though.
(loutre I've said too much, been too unkind, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:46, archived)

I very much agree.

( Jobe http://www.flickr.com/photos/joefreeman, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:47, archived)