But that's the point.
You get him writing pages and pages of superfluous adjectives about meaningless things, and then half a page of crudely written torture and sexual violence.

You can't have one without the other, otherwise it's just porn for mentalists.
(mookay pick em up picklehead, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:43, archived)

I know
I wasn't really being serious. But fuck, I wished he'd shut up about oliver peoples fucking glasses for a bit.

anyway, arguably it is just porn for mentalists.
(loutre I've said too much, been too unkind, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:45, archived)

i actually started to feel guilty for looking forward to the sick bits

(mookay pick em up picklehead, Thu 15 May 2008, 14:47, archived)