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# Oooh.
If you ever need someone to be a beta reader, feel free to gaz me :)
(I helped save b3ta! Yo 'Ho of Charlie mass-market saucetrepreneur, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 19:48, archived)
# I may very well do :D
The way it looks now, it cuts from first person anecdotes to traditional speech bubbles quite a bit. Might have to sort that out, so it's not too distracting.
(I helped save b3ta! Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:04, archived)
# Yes
I enjoy getting pedantic about that sort of thing.
(I helped save b3ta! Yo 'Ho of Charlie mass-market saucetrepreneur, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:15, archived)
# Or leave it as it is and just say it's your style.
(I helped save b3ta! Mu Dinofiddler, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:15, archived)
# It's almost like Rorschach's sections in Watchmen, but somehow more deranged.
(I helped save b3ta! Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:33, archived)
# Is this what you intended?
If not, is it actually a bad thing?
(I helped save b3ta! Mu Dinofiddler, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:34, archived)
# It wasn't intentional at all.
But it is by no means a bad thing. I'm thinking of cutting it down a bit though.
(I helped save b3ta! Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:45, archived)
# If you've never read Kurt Vonnegut's Breakfast Of Champions
It might make you feel a little better about playing fast and loose with style. It's really fun to read psycho jumpy stuff where you honestly don't know what the author will do next.
(Smoked Oysters Yes, magick helmet! And I will give you a sample!, Mon 11 Jun 2012, 23:33, archived)