Animation great, storytelling slow
The problem is one of pace - think how much happens in a 30' TV show (in reality often 22' of action), in this we're at minute 8 discussing story establisher. Also has cutaways to humorous elements which feel inappropriately timed.
Taking nothing away from the implementation - looks great, great styling, decent animation, just the storytelling isn't up to the same level. Put this guy with a good script, could be something amazing.
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0nyx, Sat 25 Jan 2014, 18:26,
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