Personally I like the level of slapstick
although if you tone it up the naration should be more deadpan
(Cocodaye Miaserelikes chips and peas, Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:16,
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Personally I like the level of slapstick
Cocodaye Miasere likes chips and peas, Mon 1 Feb 2010, 18:16,
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