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This is a question Mix Tapes

Everyone's made a mix tape (or CD, USB stick, or whatever kids do these days). Mostly to get in someone else's pants, but we're sure there are other, lesser, reasons too.

So, who did you make it for and why?
And... what was on it?

(, Thu 7 Feb 2008, 13:41)
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No mix tapes story, instead a bit taken from the same story as the earlier peaches lines. I could have put this in the Stalker qotw - it's from my stalker novel. I could also have put it into a stealing qotw. Or your worst journey qotw.

So it's a mixed qotw (near enough for me).

Caution - may contain erotic prose

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It was a Wednesday when I first spoke to him; I decided that it was time. My time to enter his life; to gently slit the thin curtain that lay between us, to slip into his world unbidden and as yet unwanted. I pushed up against him as we squashed into the Victoria line tube at 8.30am; I took his wallet.


Swimming in the hot crush my hands slide down my body, my breathing quickens, my eyes close. Short sharp breaths, heart pounding, I feel the hardness of his thigh.

Swallow, breathe.

My torso; close, fitted to his back.

Swallow, breathe.

Hand to waist; I feel his belt; hard leather, my finger wants to trail along its length. Lower now; back pocket, smooth edge of fabric.

Swallow, breathe.

Fingers slip into the soft fold, feel the hard shiny wallet.

Swallow, breathe.

The train lurches as we go around a corner; I am grateful of the chance to lift and take it. I move his wallet to me; hold it close against my stomach, slip it into my shirt, down further into my clothes; warm still.

Swallow, breathe.


My breathing slowed. I stood enjoying the warmth of him against me. The world slid away and my fingertips tingled with the memory of touching him. I have touched him; his body has touched mine; I closed my eyes and my detached life began to melt into his.

Is this what it would feel like to lie next to him on a warm summer’s morning?


This was the beginning, the start, the point from which everything unravelled and slid away, far away until nothing of me was left.

*****


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(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 10:36, 9 replies)
Oh dear!
I'm off again.

Have you any idea how difficult it is to be aroused and organized. My work will suffer!!
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 10:42, closed)
Blimey
A real surge in quality suddenly - have you seen the previous post!

Don't know whether I'm coming or going...
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 10:48, closed)
yawn....sounds like a mills and boon novel....
not saying I could do better, probably not, but sounds like you have the potential to go MUCH HARDER in your imagery!...well do you? ;)

(if this were 18th century france/england I would have a glove that I would gently slap across your cheek then throw on the floor, ready for you to pick it up and accept the challenge).
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 12:57, closed)

Of course I can go much, much harder in my imagery, but I get paid to do that. This is just for fun...and that was a first draft.

*EDIT* If I go really hard I'm not sure I'll be able to deal with the resulting 'fall out'....
However, if there does end up being a qotw which requires 'erotica' rest assured I will up my game...big time....
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 13:03, closed)
^^The Lady of Chicken Manor
Would respond by having her excessively six-packed and un-necessarily shirtless gamekeeper bludgeon you mercilessly, before instructing him to release the hounds and sending you on your way with a dose of buckshot in close pursuit.

She would then retire with a brimming glass of Madeira to watch the pack's pursuit around her extensive well-manicured grounds (suspiciously over-staffed with young, virile, yeomen) before returning to take up her quill once more.
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 13:03, closed)
!
Absolute filth.
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 13:40, closed)
Osok
You've accurately described la Poulet Madame's country estate in exquisite detail!

I must get back to tending m'lady's gardens, otherwise she'll beat me again for sure.
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 13:53, closed)
I'm really curious
about the rest of this novel now. MOAR!
(, Tue 12 Feb 2008, 13:53, closed)
Is it only me
Who reads this and thinks it sounds like a horny story of a bloke getting his pocket picked?
(, Wed 13 Feb 2008, 6:14, closed)

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