Try pasting the post in Word and running a spellcheck and grammar check
I also reread my posts back to myself, as if I were telling a story to someone else. It's not infallible, but it helps to make the words "flow" better.

By all means edit and repost, hopefully it'll make the post easier to read and allow the story to be conveyed.

Good luck.
(Bicycle Repairman "you're also a bit of a wanker", Tue 13 Jan 2009, 11:34, 1 reply)

Good thinking batman !!!
I might as well let you b3tards edit yourselfs sorry.Go for it ladies and gentlemen my english lets face it is wank,A D for gcse

If not kick my arse and advise the punctuation fuck up.

Im half awake if thats an excuse !!! :-)
(Uncle Ed is lurking around, Tue 13 Jan 2009, 11:43, closed)

It's okay, not all of us are degree language students
Anything that helps the story shine through is constructive criticism.

The main thing is that you're not afraid to have a crack at it, for that you should be applauded.
(Bicycle Repairman "you're also a bit of a wanker", Tue 13 Jan 2009, 12:04, closed)