not bad
that last verse could be better
and more lyrical
but all in all, good
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Smash Monkey lowering the tone of the whole internet,
Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:30,
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I wanted to
Go for something a bit better, but gave in, and though, fook it, quote Two Pint's Of Lager, yay, everyones a winner!
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Multi-Coloured Pop Shop "twat with a ukulele",
Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:33,
archived)
when "better"
takes up valuable drinking time, "ok" will do nicely.
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Smash Monkey lowering the tone of the whole internet,
Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:35,
archived)