heh thats just great
however I have some tips to make it a bit better (I'm used to be a video editor) if you don't mind :)
Remove the dissolves for the text, just cut right into them and back out
Put more looking shots in there every so often
Take out a few frames from the action once a while, as if the film had been badly spliced - put a big POP on the audio track when u do it
Change the contrast of the film on some cuts, so it looks like its been shot on different stock
Anyway, its belting as it is, well done!
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Mon 29 Nov 2004, 14:00,
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Remove the dissolves for the text, just cut right into them and back out
Put more looking shots in there every so often
Take out a few frames from the action once a while, as if the film had been badly spliced - put a big POP on the audio track when u do it
Change the contrast of the film on some cuts, so it looks like its been shot on different stock
Anyway, its belting as it is, well done!