I made a comic

Clicky to read it
( Jahled The most heroic gerbil in Guildford, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:26, archived)

I see two different litters . . .

( Valin . . . Screenning Screens . . ., Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:31, archived)

you wrote before twice

(serge-fabrizio taught the Talk to Frank robot to call him father, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:32, archived)

It's meant to heighten the sense of urgency
I think i'll give up on this compo lark
( Jahled The most heroic gerbil in Guildford, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:36, archived)

ah i see
it would make more sense if you put ... after the first before
(serge-fabrizio taught the Talk to Frank robot to call him father, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:38, archived)

Also,
too is spelt wrong...
( Tu9 Has been lurking since, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:50, archived)

We're all DOOMED

ning chap
( mediocre Cows and bisexuals are gonna kill me, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:35, archived)

Nings matey :)

( Jahled The most heroic gerbil in Guildford, Sun 9 Mar 2008, 18:37, archived)