prose? my feelings in haiku
I am not emo,
Never would I talk through rhyme,
I dislike poems.
I really like bears,
I think they are aliens,
Not from planet earth.
one two three four five,
one two three four five six se,
one two three four five.
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Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:27,
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Never would I talk through rhyme,
I dislike poems.
I really like bears,
I think they are aliens,
Not from planet earth.
one two three four five,
one two three four five six se,
one two three four five.
not bad
that last verse could be better
and more lyrical
but all in all, good
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Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:30,
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and more lyrical
but all in all, good
I wanted to
Go for something a bit better, but gave in, and though, fook it, quote Two Pint's Of Lager, yay, everyones a winner!
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Thu 5 Jul 2007, 2:33,
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