Another piece of great writing
Us b3tans are certainly a talented bunch.

Now, if I was going to criticise, I would say that some of the sentences can be a bit long and unwieldy - they need more breaks, maybe a comma here and there. As an example, "He waved away her embarrassment and apologies and looking deep into her clear grey eyes asked her to go for coffee after work" could become, "He waved away her embarrassment and apologies, looked deep into her clear grey eyes, and asked her to go for coffee after work" Other than that, however, the writing is excellent.

Nicely done - you get a "Woo Yay!" from me ;)

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(Pavlov's Frog figures no-one really reads sigs anyway, Sat 5 Jul 2008, 21:24, Reply)