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rob, Sun 1 Apr 2001, 1:00)
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MmmmmVery nice. My only nitpick would be the happy ending. I find short stories more enjoyable when they end on an unanswered question. I find it makes them stick around in my head longer.
So, I suppose my constructive criticism would be: consider changing the ending, perhaps to suggest that Catherine isn't quite gone yet...
Having said all that, it works well as it is. This is just my personal taste :-)
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chart cat has an itch, Sun 6 Jul 2008, 15:48,
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