Feh.
I'm guessing you probably meant "Because education is not solely the responsibility of a school."

The paragraph beginning "The law states ..." is bordering on illegible. If you find yourself resorting to parenthesis like that then it's a good sign that you have your clauses in a muddle.

The subsequent paragraphs get progressively worse. Hyphens Dashes almost invariably mean "shit shit shit where do I put my comma where do I put my comma??"

If you're going to panic about literacy then you might want to start with your own. Physician etc etc.
( Dr. Shambolic je suis charlie, Thu 31 Mar 2011, 16:30, 3 replies)

Muphry's law

( Wet-chinned bag shanker Cannot parse Wogan, Thu 31 Mar 2011, 16:46, closed)

Also, I think you meant dashes, not hyphens.
please don't shout at me
( Wet-chinned bag shanker Cannot parse Wogan, Thu 31 Mar 2011, 16:48, closed)

Ha. You're absolutely right.
rule 7: all pedantry will contain errors
( Dr. Shambolic je suis charlie, Thu 31 Mar 2011, 16:57, closed)

Ahem.
You might want a full stop at the end of the sentence.
( DukeEuphoria Comes highly reccomended, Fri 1 Apr 2011, 14:10, closed)

^
I clicked 'reply' so that I could make these exact points. Thanks for doing if first.

also: "articulate themselves"
( 4Q just lurking, Fri 1 Apr 2011, 0:30, closed)